touchstone pictures

Timelines

Preliminary Task

This is my preliminary task. Here you can see how much improvement has been made with our pieces. The following improvements include:

• The lighting in our latest piece has improved as you can always see everyones faces
• The 180 degree rule has been stuck to
• The editing has been better as now the individual clips flow into one another
• The main character is well established
• The mise en scene clearly relates to the genre
  

Feedback from final opening

• Titles could have been clearer but they did suit the film- however when watching this from the original on high quailty the titles are clear and fine.
  
• Our soundtrack was improved from the roughcut and our class thought it was good.
• Our class like the arrows on the freeze frames and thought it worked well.
• The whole opening was seen as very appropriate for the genre.
• Close up could have been good towards the end of the opening
  

Comparison shots

Final Piece

Roughcut Feedback

After pitching our roughcut, several ideas to improve upon our final piece have been established. Some of these points include:

• Making the titles clearer
• Fading between production logo and opening
• Wider variety of shots
• Shot variety improved when establishing the main character
• Making some shots less choppy
• Make the music less repetitive